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Chapter 3 - “Fix This, Elena”My mother called seventeen times before dinner.

I answered on the eighteenth.

Not because she'd worn me down.

Because Camille had confirmed they were safely inside the hotel.

I stood on the villa terrace overlooking the darkening Mediterranean as Mom's voice exploded through the phone.

“What have you done?”

No hello.

No apology.

Just accusation.

“I changed my reservation.”

“You canceled our villa!”

“No. I kept my villa.”

There was silence.

Then Mom lowered her voice.

“Elena, don't play games.”

“I'm not.”

“We've just traveled all the way to France.”

“I know.”

“You invited us.”

“I invited you to travel with me.”

“You knew Madison was coming.”

“I found out two hours before departure.”

“You're being childish.”

The word landed exactly as she intended.

For decades, Mom had a talent for turning my response to bad behavior into the greater offense.

If Madison borrowed my clothes without asking and ruined them, I was materialistic for being angry.

If Dad forgot my birthday but remembered Madison's, I was dramatic for mentioning it.

If Mom promised Christmas at my house and changed plans because Madison “wasn't feeling festive,” I was inflexible.

And now I was childish because I had refused to finance my own exclusion.

“Where's Dad?” I asked.

“Right here.”

“And Madison?”

“Crying.”

I almost laughed.

“What happened?”

“She feels humiliated.”

“Why?”

“Because your driver refused to bring us to the villa.”

“My driver?”

Mom ignored that.

“People were watching, Elena.”

“You told a stranger at the airport that you had replaced the primary guest on a private reservation. What did you expect?”

“I expected my daughter to have enough decency not to embarrass us.”

My grip tightened around the phone.

“Mom, you told me I wasn't welcome on the vacation I purchased.”

“We never said you weren't welcome.”

“You replaced me.”

“Because your sister needed this.”

“So did I.”

Silence.

It was remarkable how rarely anyone in my family knew what to say when I suggested I might need something too.

Finally Dad came onto the phone.

“Elena.”

“Hi, Dad.”

He sounded exhausted.

“I think everybody's emotions are high.”

Mine had apparently joined the conversation only after theirs became inconvenient.

“Probably.”

“Can we come to the villa tomorrow and talk?”

I looked through the glass doors.

Inside, a chef was preparing the welcome dinner I'd originally selected for the three of us.

Dad loved sea bass.

Mom loved anything with truffles.

The table had been set for three.

When I arrived, Camille had quietly removed two settings.

“I'll think about it.”

Dad sighed.

“Come on, sweetheart.”

I closed my eyes.

There was a time when that word could repair almost anything between us.

Not tonight.

“Did you agree to replace me?”

Another silence.

“Elena—”

“Yes or no?”

He exhaled.

“Your mother thought—”

“Dad.”

“Yes.”

The answer hurt even though I already knew it.

“Why?”

“Madison has been struggling.”

“So everyone keeps saying.”

“She was really down after Trevor.”

“She dated Trevor for four months.”

“That doesn't mean it didn't hurt.”

“I took three weeks off work after Mom's surgery last year. Do you remember what happened when I asked Madison to cover one afternoon?”

He didn't answer.

“She said she had Pilates.”

“Elena.”

“Dad, I'm not arguing about who deserves compassion. I'm asking why hers always costs me something.”

There was nothing on the other end.

For years, I thought Dad's silence meant neutrality.

That night I finally understood it was participation.

Not as loud as Mom's.

Not as obvious.

But participation nonetheless.

“I'll call tomorrow,” I said.

“Elena, we're in another country.”

“And you're safe.”

“We don't know what we're doing.”

“You're fifty-nine and sixty-three, Dad. You'll figure it out.”

I ended the call.

My hands were shaking.

A voice behind me said, “Dinner is ready whenever you are.”

I turned.

Camille stood near the terrace door.

She hadn't heard everything.

But she'd heard enough.

“I don't think I'm hungry.”

She looked toward the beautifully set table.

“Then perhaps we change the plan.”

Thirty minutes later, instead of eating formal dinner alone, Camille took me to a tiny neighborhood restaurant run by her cousin.

There were no white gloves.

No tasting menu.

No oceanfront violinist.

We ate handmade pasta at a wooden table while an old French couple argued affectionately beside us.

It was the best meal I'd had in months.

Camille told me about her two brothers.

I told her about Madison.

She listened without interrupting.

At one point she asked, “Has your family always expected you to solve things?”

“Yes.”

“And what happens when you don't?”

I thought about it.

“They get angry.”

“That is useful information.”

I smiled.

“You sound like my therapist.”

“You have one?”

“No.”

“You should.”

I laughed.

Maybe I should.

When I returned to the villa, there were more messages.

Madison had joined the campaign.

You are unbelievable.

Mom and Dad are stressed because of you.

I didn't ask them to choose me.

That one caught my attention.

I replied.

Did you know before this morning?

The typing bubble appeared.

Disappeared.

Returned.

Then:

Know what?

I stared at it.

That they planned to take you instead of me.

No response for nearly ten minutes.

Then:

Mom said you might not be able to go because of work.

My stomach went cold.

I immediately called her.

She declined.

I called again.

Declined.

Then a text:

I'm tired. We'll talk tomorrow.

I read her message again.

Mom said you might not be able to go because of work.

I had never said that.

I had confirmed my vacation days repeatedly.

I had sent Mom our final itinerary four days earlier.

So why would she tell Madison I might not be coming?

Unless this hadn't been decided last night.

I opened my laptop.

The emergency card I'd given my parents was connected to an account I rarely checked because they almost never used it.

I logged in.

Madison's airline ticket appeared immediately.

Purchased the previous evening.

But below it was another charge.

Two weeks earlier.

A luggage store.

$1,460.

Then a clothing boutique.

$870.

Then a travel insurance company.

The insured traveler:

Madison Hart.

Policy purchase date:

Eighteen days ago.

I sat completely still.

They hadn't made a sudden decision because Madison was hurting.

They had planned this for almost three weeks.

They had let me send restaurant confirmations.

They had let me discuss packing lists.

Mom had called three days earlier to ask whether the villa had a hair dryer.

Dad had texted that he couldn't wait to see Monaco with me.

All while they knew I wasn't going.

Something deeper than anger settled over me.

It wasn't spontaneous selfishness.

It was deception.

My phone rang again.

Mom.

This time I answered immediately.

She began, “Finally. Listen, Elena, tomorrow we need—”

“How long?”

She stopped.

“What?”

“How long have you known Madison was coming?”

Silence.

“I already told you—”

“I found the travel insurance.”

Nothing.

“Eighteen days ago, Mom.”

Still nothing.

“The luggage. The clothes. You used the card.”

Dad said something faintly in the background.

Mom covered the phone.

Then returned.

“You're checking our purchases?”

“My card.”

“It was for emergencies.”

“You spent nearly three thousand dollars preparing Madison for a vacation you planned to take from me.”

Her voice hardened.

“We were going to tell you.”

“When?”

“We wanted to avoid drama.”

I laughed once.

“You wanted to avoid giving me time to say no.”

“You would have overreacted.”

“So you waited until the car was supposed to leave.”

“Elena, your sister needed this more than you.”

There it was again.

The family motto.

Madison needed.

Elena provided.

I stared out at the moonlit Mediterranean.

“What exactly did you think would happen?”

“We assumed you would understand.”

“No. What did you think would happen to the reservations?”

“You already paid.”

I closed my eyes.

That was the answer.

They genuinely believed my money belonged to the family once spent.

My presence was optional.

The benefits were not.

Mom continued.

“Now that you've proved your point, add Madison to the villa and send the driver tomorrow morning.”

“No.”

Her voice dropped.

“What did you say?”

“No.”

“Elena.”

“I'll pay for tonight's hotel because I don't want you stranded. From tomorrow onward, the trip you chose is yours.”

“You cannot seriously expect your parents to pay thousands of dollars because you're jealous of your sister.”

“I'm not jealous of Madison.”

“You've always resented how close we are to her.”

I looked toward the black horizon.

“No, Mom. I resented what I had to become to earn half the consideration you gave her for free.”

She went silent.

I almost wished she would shout.

Instead she said coldly:

“You're going to regret treating your family this way.”

Then she hung up.

I stood alone for a long time.

A minute later, an email arrived.

Not from Mom.

From my bank's fraud department.

The subject line made my stomach tighten.

Unusual transaction attempt — card ending 4812.

Someone had just tried to charge €9,800 at a luxury hotel in Nice.

May you like

Using my emergency card.

And I knew exactly who was holding it.

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